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So, yesterday I finished the first draft of Blood Fury, my first novel in the maran world.
Now, I need people to read it and give me critical feedback. If you think you are up to the task, please let me know and I will get you a copy.
Currently, it is on the short side at just over 25,000 words (the ‘average’ sci-fi/fantasy novel is around 60-80,000 words). One of the things I am looking for is areas where the reader thinks the book could use some more depth.
Reply via comment here with your email address, to my email, or on my twitter or facebook pages if you are interested.
Picking up where part 1 left off. Let me know what you think.
By the time I reached the balcony outside Marilee’s apartment in the mid-Wilshire district, I felt I had recovered sufficiently to attempt a slow change. Thus, I only slightly frost-damaged Marilee’s window-box full of spider plants. Getting Marilee’s attention turned out to be more difficult. I pounded on the glass sliding door for several minutes, and had just about made up my mind to break it open and pay for it later, when Marilee came out of the bedroom, wrapping a robe around her voluptuous body. She scowled when she saw me standing there naked on her balcony, but she opened the door and let me in.